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Epically-amazingly-brilliantly-fantastic! :green:
Plleeeaaaaasssssseeeeee, update? *is on my knees begging*

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I haven't commented recently but I have been keeping up to date on this fanfic I promise! <3 really aewsome as usual :D

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I'll try to update this weekend! :D

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Yay! :green: Looking forward to it!

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Character in a comic strip just named a baby raven "Lenore."

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 Post subject: Re: The Tell-Tale Hearts (Take Two)
 Post Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 5:08 am 
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oh please reply, i need something to cheer me up.

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AVPM reference: "I'm Molly Weasely...and those are my kids."
Gotta love that poor awkward pilot.

The figure raised the gun to point at Palan's chest. "I'm Number One...and those are my kids."

Fear flashed across Palan's face. He swore quietly, still keeping a hold of Violet and Ernest, but didn't seem to be able to produce any words beyond that.
"Let them go," Number One commanded, slowly climbing the laddeer while keeping the gun level. Palan released their arms and took a few shaky steps backwards. Ernest hurried to his father's side, but Violet stayed where she was.
"Violet!" Number One hissed, not taking his eyes off Palan. "Get behind me!"
Violet looked around the little attic before saying almost casually, "No."
"Violet..." Ernest muttered.
"This is no time for games," Number One growled. "Get over here right now."
"'No time for games,'" she repeated. "Do you think we just view everything as a game? Do you think we don't know how serious something like this is?"
"I know you don't know how serious this is!" he snapped. "That's why you're standing there being stubborn instead of listening to me!"
"No, YOU listen to ME!" she yelled. The gun wavered slightly. "You think we came all the way out here on some stupid childish whim? We came out here to find him!" She thrust a finger at Palan, who was standing stock-still, his wide blue-green eyes never leaving the gun. "We came here to find him, and find the chip, and show you that you don't have to just leave us at home all the time! We know how to do things! And speaking of the chip, I bet you haven't even NOTICED that it's RIGHT HERE!" She pointed at the tubs and tubs of memory cards and computer chips behind her. "You didn't even notice, did you?" Tears were starting to spill down her face now. "You didn't notice! Say you didn't!"
"I didn't!" Number One yelled back. "I didn't notice! I didn't notice because from the moment I stepped into this attic the only thing I've been able to focus on is the danger you two are in! Is that a good enough excuse?!"
There was silence.
"Maybe for her," said Palan. "But not for me." He grabbed the TOP PRIORITY folder off the table and ducked under the gun, barrelling into Number One and sending him crashing to the ground at the bottom of the ladder as the supervillain fired a wild shot into the ceiling. Climbing to his feet, Palan dashed away down the hall.

I'd love to post more, but I have to go do stuff. Nyyaahh! Just when things are heating up!

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*le gaspeth* Me gusta...

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Me gusta mucho!! Es epico! :green:

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great update. more please? *big round puppydog eyes*

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Mehhh, UPDATE pleassseeee? :(
Please and Thank You? :D

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You should update!!!!! I've had a horrible couple of days and it would really make them better:)

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I can't update tomorrow, but I'll try to on Sunday. :)

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 Post Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:07 pm 
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Reading Snivel: The Fifth Circle of Heck. Heh heh heh. Vice-Principal Poe and his tell-tale tattle-telling heart in a jar. Heh heh. I am amused.

Nero's a bit OOC in this, at least in the first part, but, I mean, it is kind of an awkward situation.

Men are really stupid sometimes, Lenore mused, keeping her eyes trained on the house with blue shutters. Actually, make that most of the time. She shifted the katanas in her hands, taking care to stay within the shadow cast by the house across from Palan's. Number One had disappeared inside moments ago, and she kept her muscles tense, on high alert in case she was needed - although she didn't know how much she'd be able to do under the circumstances. If a flower was dying or a bouquet needed arranging, sure, she'd be right there, but working with a group of villains to apprehend a villain who supposedly had her memories of an unknown past life on a computer chip? That was a little out of her league.
A hand touched her shoulder, and she swung her sword reflexively, bringing it to within an inch of her attacker's nose. It was Nero - Max - Nero - damn it all, that guy with the suit. There was no way she was calling him "the father" just yet, especially with that nervous look on his -
"Oh. Sorry." She moved the katana away from his face.
"It's my fault. I assumed you would...be aware..." he cleared his throat, smoothing his cravat. "I just came to see...if...how you're doing..."
This is like the grade-school playground all over again. Lenore smiled obligingly. "Pretty good for a crash-course in villainy and memory loss. You?"
Nero - just call him that for now, it's less awkward - smiled back, seeming genuinely pleased that she was answering. "I'm fine." His eyes, she noticed, were everywhere but on her. "I do hope Number One finds his children soon so we can get back to the original mission."
"You mean the one to re-replace my memories?" His face fell slightly. "I'm sorry," she said hurriedly, just as he began speaking as well.
"I didn't mean -"
"To make you feel like -"
"-R18-!" they said in unison as a gunshot echoed from Palan's house.


Sorry that was really short...more tomorrow, if there's time?!

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Oooh! Update update update!

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Ooh! Great update! And Nero is sooo in love with her :green:

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Luv the update. is there any chance for more. please. pretty please. pretty please with a cherry on top.
please please please. have i begge4d enough? *big round puppy-dog eyes*

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Great update. :green:
The only complaint i ever have about your fanfics is that the updates are too short! :D

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So, I don't think I'll be able to be on over the next few weeks. I'll get you guys a nice fat update as soon as I can, but I'm not sure when that'll be. I'd try to write it now, but the TV's on behind me and I can't write with it in my ear. And no, I'm not on a laptop. Sorry.

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