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  • Posted by ConstantVandal 3 years ago. There are 9 posts. The latest reply is from ConstantVandal.
  1. Not exactly a fan-fic...as this has nothing to do with HIVE other than the villenous qualities of some of the characters, i may never write any more of this, but please tell me what you think:

    I snapped my eyes open. Twisting around I realized I had been lying face down on a hardwood floor that was not as clean as I would have liked. Looking up, three faces swam into view. Two girls, who looked about 17 and were exact opposites, and a boy about my age, maybe a year older.
    No sooner had I glimpsed them…and they vanished. What the heck? I sat up quickly, groaned and sank back down once more. It wasn’t so much the slight headache that made me lie back down, but the sickening realization that I could only remember three things about myself. My name is Vienna, today is my birthday, I am 16.
    Nothing more. Just the black empty space of my mind. No sooner had I come to this realization than something, quite suddenly appeared in the circular stone room. A cheerfully wrapped package with a ridiculous pin bow that was quite at odds with my surroundings. I read the note attached:
    “Dear Vienna,
    Derek is ever so sorry for the memory loss, and we hope you’ll forgive him in time for he truly did not mean it. In this package is the key to the door, your battle whip and daggers, please save this world. Thanks!
    -The Fairies”
    That explained so much, I thought sarcastically.

    A Brief Note of Paranoria: Please don't steal my ideas...i would be really upset..not to mention angry.

  2. Comments, suggestions, and writing tips would be appreciated...also just saying you like it would make me very happy

    EDIT: really starting to second guess the title...sounds too much like "The Sun Also Rises" hmmm...

  3. "Hello China where the sun sets, my name is Japan where the sun rises."
    "...Well how rude!"

    Kekeke, that's what the title reminds me of, a conversation from Hetalia. Don't change it, it's fun!

    As for writing tips, I have none, since I'm definitely not the best writer... ;;;; It's really fun though, I laughed at the letter signed by "the fairys!"

  4. "Hello China where the sun sets, my name is Japan where the sun rises."
    "...Well how rude!"

    Kekeke, that's what the title reminds me of, a conversation from Hetalia. Don't change it, it's fun!

    As for writing tips, I have none, since I'm definitely not the best writer... ;;;; It's really fun though, I laughed at the letter signed by "the fairys!"

  5. Aw, thanks....i'll need to think of what comes next though, if i'm going to continue writing it...

  6. Interesting...

  7. Nice.

  8. I like it. Write more! And the title reminds me of people saying, "shove it where the sun does not shine."
    Whether this is good or not, I leave to you to decide. I like it though. Where is the next bit?

  9. in my head as of now...i will attempt to write, although my currently unfinished novel is calling me. Thanks!

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